As bad as misusing words may be,
the habit of applicants to use exaggerated language or flowery words to
convey what could otherwise be stated simply and succinctly is also
frowned upon.
“There seems to be a trend of adding a lot of fluffy words to résumés,” says
Cydney Koukol, chief communications officer for
Talent Plus,
an employee development organization. “When there is a bank of just
words on a résumé that describe the person, a lot is lost and usually
gets overlooked. … The fluff may be a reality but most of the time it’s
just that–fluff.”
5. Using multiple pages
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Perhaps the most common mistake
made by applicants is including too much information in their
résumé—letting it run for two or three pages. The motivation make sense:
You have a lot of experience and want to convey it all. But think of
your résumé from the perspective of the hiring manager who is having to
sift through dozens or even hundreds of these. They’re not getting past
the first page and may even see multiple pages as a sign you don’t
respect their time.
“If the résumé is longer than a page, I dismiss it immediately,” says
Dana Case, director of operations at
MyCorporation.com. “Résumés should be short and concise. One page will suffice no matter how many jobs you have had previously.”
6. Packing in the text
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Of course you think you have a
lot of relevant experience and accomplishments you’d like to share with
the selection committee. But that can sometimes lead to the urge to cram
in every single bit of information onto a single page, fiddling with
the font size and margins to fit as much detail as possible. And that
doesn’t impress the reader with your experience.
“Cramming too much text onto your one-page résumé is an eyesore,” says
Rebecca Safier, founder of
Remote Bliss,
a job board and resource for remote professionals. “Instead of cramming
everything in there, choose the most recent and relevant job
experiences. Pick and choose each word carefully, so you can say a lot
in a few words. Sometimes, less is more. And a clean, eye-catching
design is more important than including every job you’ve ever had on
your CV.”
7. Using outdated experience
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Speaking of the dangers of cramming too much information into your
résumé, another classic error is to include your whole job history,
dating back a decade or more.
“Showcasing your experience is
important, but putting things on your résumé that date further back than
five years becomes unnecessary and unimportant,” says
Jordan Wan, founder and CEO of
CloserIQ,
a recruitment firm that works with organizations to build their sales
organizations. “You can explain all of your skills in your cover letter;
stick to your most recent employment on your résumé.”
8. Not celebrating your promotions
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On résumés, we tend to focus on where we worked and for how long, but
the steps up the ladder that we made at each company tend to get lost
in the layout. And that’s a major missed opportunity.
“Any
promotion
is quite the accomplishment and as such, should be highlighted,” says
Wan. “Make sure to note how long you were at each leg of your journey
with said company.”
9. Adding overblown titles
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If you’ve been working as a
freelance graphic designer, there’s no need to call yourself “CEO and
founder” of a pseudo company that consists of you
working out of your apartment.
This
is doubly true for those relatively new to the workforce. “Intern
experience is critical to landing your first job out of college, but
that doesn’t mean you’re an ‘industry professional’ just yet,” says Shirley Paolinelli,
director of human resources at The Motion Agency, a marketing agency
based in Chicago, Illinois. Instead, she suggests using verbiage such as
“(your industry) intern seeking a full-time role” or “aspiring (your
industry) professional” or “soon-to-be graduate seeking a full-time
role.”
10. Using cliché phrases
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You know them when you see them—those turns of phrase that are so
familiar they seem like just what a résumé reader would want to see. But
don’t be tempted by the comforting sound of a cliché—it just makes you
come across as a cliché yourself.
“Do not include overused terms or phrases like, ‘out of the box thinker,’ ‘team player,’ or ‘hard worker,’” urges
Michael Stahl, executive vice president and chief marketing officer of
HealthMarkets,
an independent health insurance agency that distributes health,
Medicare, life, and supplemental insurance products. “I think these are
all traits that are assumed a person should or will have. You don’t need
to include things like this in a résumé; instead, be prepared to have
examples to share that exemplify how you are a team player, an ‘out of
the box thinker.’”
Bryan Zawikowski,
a 25-year recruiting vet who is the vice president and general manager
of the military transition division for executive recruitment firm
Lucas Group,
has some more words to stay away from. “‘Multitasking’ is overused and
does not describe specific experience,” he says. “The word ‘seasoned’
makes me think of a cooking show. ‘Game changer’ is one of many overused
sports references. ‘Change agent’ is better, but not by much.”
11. Listing responsibilities
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Many applicants simply list the responsibilities they had in their
previous job and that’s not exactly a riveting or impressive read.
“Giving a general job description doesn’t communicate anything about
what you accomplished in the role,” says Safier. “So try to shift your
language to highlight your
achievements, rather than giving generic descriptions that could apply to anyone who held that same position.”
12. And not quantifying achievements
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While it’s important to convey
what you did on the daily at your previous jobs, it’s much more
effective to list your achievements in the positions, putting the focus
on what you accomplished, rather than what the baseline expectations
were for your job.
“When I’m looking at résumés, I’d like to be able to see the results the candidate produced,” says
Regina Barr, founder and CEO of
Red Ladder, Inc,
a corporate consultancy and professional development company. “How did
they save the company time or money? What did they do that helped the
company make money? What did they do to improve efficiency? If I can’t
easily figure this out then I move on. Plus, what they do or don’t call
out helps me get a sense of what the candidate does or does not consider
important and also gives some insights into their thinking.”
13. Writing to the job you have
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Remember that the résumé is not a
summary of your job experience—it’s an advertisement for why you are a
great fit for the job to which you are applying. The distinction between
these two is often overlooked by applicants, according to
Keirsten A. Greggs, founder of
TRAP Recruiter, LLC and a recruiter with almost two decades of experience.
“Job
seekers aren’t writing to the job they want, they are writing to the
job they have,” says Greggs. “Recruiters and hiring managers are looking
for evidence that your skills and experience can be utilized to solve a
problem at their organization. They are looking for synergies and
transferable skills.”
14. Including a professional objective
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It was once the norm to include an “objective” at the top of a résumé—a couple of sentences that explained your goal for the position to which you were applying. But not any longer!
“Writing a personal objective at the top of your résumé isn’t encouraged anymore,” explains Safier. “Hiring managers aren’t as interested in your personal goals as in what you can contribute to their company. Rather than writing your personal objectives, consider putting a summary of accomplishments at the top. Highlight your experiences and achievements that are most relevant to the job at hand.”
15. Including “references available”
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Zawikowski describes including the phrase “References available upon request” as a “waste of space and stating the obvious.” Like an “objective,” including this line was once the norm for applicants, but now it just comes off as superfluous. The recruiter knows you’ve got references and they’ll ask for them—no need to say it.
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